Second Look

You made something. Before you put it out, you want someone to tell you what isn't landing.

Send me what you have: a landing page, a short plan, a concept, a half-built offer.

You'll get back a written review that tells you where someone loses the thread, what you left out because it was obvious to you and isn't to anyone else, and the one thing I'd fix before you publish.

What this is not: a prediction that it will work. I review what's in front of me, not what the market will do.

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